Submerged – tanka

Drowning yet rising
              deepest stages of my dreams
   capturing each breath
                awaken to reality
                               salted tears kissing my face



Poem © Naziyah Mahmood, 2014
(Image taken from the very creative work at


13 thoughts on “Submerged – tanka

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